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    dots Submission Name: Dysfunctionaldots
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    Author: expiring_touch
    ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 137/243/158
    Words: 20
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Who, autumn, who
    leaves differences
    untied
    in kisses: chilled lips
    upon my weary
    rugged
    nose?




    Submitted on 2012-10-01 10:00:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oooh I love fall, you've captured it greatly
    | Posted on 2012-10-07 00:00:00 | by metallichick786 | [ Reply to This ]
      :) This little poem brought a smile to my face.
    | Posted on 2012-10-03 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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