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Submission Name: Dysfunctional dots

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Author:	expiring_touch
ASL Info:	30/f/Hamburg
Elite Ratio:	3.95 - 139/254/170
Words:	20

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	1268
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Dysfunctional dots

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Who, autumn, who
leaves differences
untied
in kisses: chilled lips
upon my weary
rugged
nose?

Submitted on 2012-10-01 10:00:19 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
Oooh I love fall, you've captured it greatly
| Posted on 2012-10-07 00:00:00 | by metallichick786 | [ Reply to This ]
:) This little poem brought a smile to my face.
| Posted on 2012-10-03 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.