Dysfunctional

Author: expiring_touch ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg Elite Ratio:    3.94 - 139 /256 /171 Words: 20

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Dysfunctional

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Who, autumn, who leaves differences untied in kisses: chilled lips upon my weary rugged nose?

Submitted on 2012-10-01 10:00:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Oooh I love fall, you've captured it greatly

| Posted on 2012-10-07 00:00:00 | by metallichick786 | [ Reply to This ]

:) This little poem brought a smile to my face.

| Posted on 2012-10-03 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

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