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Joy


Author: BevRead
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Joy



from the sick and the sad there must be a point of being well
and today i claim it in the name of suffering that we cannot comprehend
in the name of Glory and Forgiveness that does reside in the fibers of being

there will be light
there will be healing
there will be justice
there will be peace

His strength has wrapped us all with Joy
and today it will be cast with a smile




Submitted on 2012-10-01 11:35:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this was interesting so few words bbut yet alot of meaning
good read in times like this

sandman
| Posted on 2012-10-03 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
  When? That's all I'm asking. Cause it's been like this for thousand of years...
| Posted on 2012-10-03 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow this is one sweet and inspiring poem. Kinda what I needed now. I like its simplicity and message very much. The title. really speaks for itself.
This was great.
| Posted on 2012-10-02 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]


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