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    dots Submission Name: Joydots
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    Author: BevRead
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 20/41/28
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsJoydots
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    from the sick and the sad there must be a point of being well
    and today i claim it in the name of suffering that we cannot comprehend
    in the name of Glory and Forgiveness that does reside in the fibers of being

    there will be light
    there will be healing
    there will be justice
    there will be peace

    His strength has wrapped us all with Joy
    and today it will be cast with a smile




    Submitted on 2012-10-01 11:35:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this was interesting so few words bbut yet alot of meaning
    good read in times like this

    sandman
    | Posted on 2012-10-03 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      When? That's all I'm asking. Cause it's been like this for thousand of years...
    | Posted on 2012-10-03 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow this is one sweet and inspiring poem. Kinda what I needed now. I like its simplicity and message very much. The title. really speaks for itself.
    This was great.
    | Posted on 2012-10-02 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]


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