Leading

Author: LiveInDreams Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 3 /6 /8 Words: 108

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Leading

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Am I leading you on? Did I do something wrong? My brain is just too jumbled to think The heart My heart It yearns for another  But sadly he's untouchable Unreachable My body feels comfortable with you Being around you is nice  But my hearts just not in it Though now I'm too far under  To pull my hook out  What should I do? Should I keep going on  Or tell you the truth? Somehow I feel this is unfair to you  But I'm not the only one to blame Your emotions overwhelm me Your touch is uncomfortable  I just don't know how to tell you I'm sorry...

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