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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    dotsWeaponsdots
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    Take out the cover,
    Unsheath

    Scribe and
    Pierce

    Sketch and
    Tear

    Break

    Heart and flesh

    A choice
    Of

    Silent wars
    Or
    Bloodshed fears

    A pen or
    Sword

    Which will it be?




    Submitted on 2012-10-03 03:42:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      either or the end result is the same a little less mess with the pen no lol
    good read

    sandman
    | Posted on 2012-10-03 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      In these days both are equally dangerous imo as wars are based on nothing more than fictitious reports...
    | Posted on 2012-10-03 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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