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    dots Submission Name: Minddots
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    Author: writinggirl93
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Mind being a deadly weapon.


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    dotsMinddots
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    My mind is unclear.
    My mind is a mess.
    I feel out of it.
    Every step I take.

    There is no one around to witness my battle.
    Just a girl who represents myself.

    I try and try but it keeps getting stronger.
    I feel helpless and scared.
    For I don't know what will come.
    The mind is the deadliest weapon.
    For it is killing me right now.




    Submitted on 2012-10-03 15:11:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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