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    dots Submission Name: Mirror Imagedots
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    Author: sandman
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    Words: 291
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMirror Imagedots
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    Look into my eyes
    And see who I have become
    Release yourself from me
    Into the ever after and see your
    Tomorrow through my eyes

    Once I was so young and simple
    But in my dying years
    Many spirits have taken me to and from life
    In my bi polar state

    The fire of the souls that rest within
    You will feel their heat
    and the anguish within me

    Take a look
    at yourself in the mirror
    One day!
    Stop and take a real look
    At who is looking back
    At yourself

    Self portrayal
    Another speaks through
    The image of you that you portray
    To others and yourself


    Some people may feel they owe it all to their self and the face they see may have no voice
    But it will change their lifeís passage
    Now I see me changing lives
    With this new spirit has birthed
    From my soul today

    Walk away in silence if you must
    I leave you with all these words
    To each of those who disregard me?
    With their life I now confront your face that has been hidden for years
    within these secrets of the spirits
    I found in the embers of anguish
    of my soul

    Anew day has awaken me
    Inside this room
    I have awaken
    Above the rest and I
    Reach for the sky

    Today is the start
    Of a new tomorrow and a new day is dawning as the dusk fades away

    Inside this room
    We awaken
    Our bodies are naked
    And our souls have healed each other
    From our years of missing
    Each otherís touch




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    ||| Comments |||
      I really like this because I can relate. and personal poems are great because it has more feeling.
    | Posted on 2012-10-04 00:00:00 | by ladyinredheels | [ Reply to This ]
      This is ok but I feel it's a bit too personal for the reader to find anything in it...
    | Posted on 2012-10-04 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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