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    dots Submission Name: Addiction dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Fanfic/Passion
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    The time has come; you are unraveling before my very eyes
    Your soon to be frail image haunts me throughout my days
    For I have seen you at your darkest moments
    I know what is awaiting for you and I

    If I choose to follow your most certain end

    You are unraveling at the seams
    You are bursting out for all "that was"
    Throwing all "that is" away

    You're unraveling may very possibly be the undoing of myself
    But ... Only time will tell

    My portrait of our fairy tale life only lasted three months...
    Here you are back on a slippery slope
    I need to decide now

    Do I follow?
    Do I walk away?

    For you are unraveling at a slow yet steady pace
    One choice today leads to an opportunity tomorrow
    One false move now
    Can land you on your face tomorrow

    A slippery slope we live upon
    Its apart of battling addiction
    Its apart of everyday life




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    ||| Comments |||
      Once again, there is so much pain, and love in your writing. And forgiveness for everyone but yourself. I agree with the previous comment the first line has a hook, but the rest of it captures the heart and twists it right along yours.

    Whatever the outcome remember, addiction is the thing that's in control of the ones we love sometimes..., and that addiction hurts us through them, and can rip through them at the very core like an atom bomb... Without someone to stand strong beside them, loving them, and reminding them that, they can be accepted .....they may never break free.

    I am always touched by the struggle inside the heart of one of the strongest, most beautiful and talented people I have ever met. And how blind to the strength that lies inside she really is.

    ......but is always so apparent in everything you write.


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    | Posted on 2012-10-09 00:00:00 | by trynfinity | [ Reply to This ]
      o like the first stanza very much sort of a hook in there. this was a goof write.
    | Posted on 2012-10-04 00:00:00 | by quicksorrow | [ Reply to This ]


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