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    dots Submission Name: enddots

    Author: ladyinredheels
    Elite Ratio:    0.99 - 4/4/4
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    It only takes a click,
    to let it fall
    and forever not hear a song.

    Submitted on 2012-10-04 18:46:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i see suicide..russian roulette...one click and never is a sound heard again..that is the last one.

    the gun falls from the hand, life falls from the body...

    and it is the "end."

    | Posted on 2012-10-05 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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