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    Author: quicksorrow
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 33/9/8
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    a little bit of chemistry to mix acid with tears
    and blast off my atmosphere
    this is a rain song,

    beats on the roof
    tone off the hook
    turn into flood
    a lot thicker than blood
    in your haste above
    I set you free as a dove
    pour as you may,
    and left my heart at bay.






    Submitted on 2012-10-04 22:28:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was a very interesting read for me..it really made me think
    | Posted on 2012-10-05 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]


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