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    dots Submission Name: Jungle Crazydots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsJungle Crazydots
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    I might lose my house run out of money
    and wreck my new truck.
    The devil
    could come and trick me out of my soul.

    All that I have in this world could come
    or go.
    But one thing I will always know.
    I will never run out of
    Crazy for you.




    Submitted on 2012-10-05 00:36:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like the picture more so because it compliments the poem. "I will never run out of crazy for you too";-)
    | Posted on 2012-10-05 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      Dale, how did you get this picture of me? ;)~

    | Posted on 2012-10-05 00:00:00 | by MmR | [ Reply to This ]
      Love the picture, do you have a special stash of those things, your illustrations always go so well with your poems? It really helped me feel the last lines.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-10-05 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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