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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsFeetdots
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    Youíre a junkie an addict
    Addicted
    to got to have it.
    No choices
    for your pleasure
    Is not found, in elusive treasure.

    Youíre desperate and crying.
    Something inside is broken
    and lying.
    Itís telling you
    this is not sick
    it is truly
    love.




    Submitted on 2012-10-05 01:15:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great enjambment in this poem, really highlights the feeling underlying the thing and allows it to be read multiple ways.

    I always delight in your photos, I think you have great instincts when it comes to pairing your words with a pic. Here though, all I can think is: how the hell do women wear those things?! I was always a tomboy though.

    I really like the play on lovesick at the end. Very nice poem.
    | Posted on 2012-10-06 00:00:00 | by emwren | [ Reply to This ]


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