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    dots Submission Name: Try and Stop Me!dots

    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsTry and Stop Me!dots

    Death tried to stop me mid-run
    somewhere south of Chicago.
    But I ran the red
    said catch up with me in bed
    today I got to travel.
    The envelope is sealed shut around my ears.
    Mystery is the sum of all my tears.
    I am sitting perched on the edge of
    poetry. And I am waiting to see if pushing
    breaks my look. Then lookout below
    because for sure I am going to jump.

    I say cauterize my eyes I can't make
    the pictures stop.
    I got dynamite for brains.
    Have you got a light?
    All the while it turns out to be true.
    Our plan was conceived by libertines
    And dedicated too
    To the proposition
    that it is a man's true
    nature to pursue
    The Lady In Pink.

    Submitted on 2012-10-05 01:25:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      these lines stand out for me,
    " I got dynamite for brains
    Have you got a light"
    These was really cool lines.

    I like the fact that you mentioned "Chicago", it has made the poem enticing, and that this actually happened. Made me want to know what happened more there. This point here makes me want to know where its heading.
    | Posted on 2012-10-05 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]

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