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    dots Submission Name: Bleachersdots
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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
    Total Views: 791
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    Description:
       for my crush, lifetimes ago . . .


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsBleachersdots
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    a silent cheerleader
    with a heart fully yours
    hiding,
    cheering,
    at the back row

    a star player
    (in my eyes)
    doing what he loves,
    with his timeless smile;
    a perfect view

    sitting there
    with hopes ushering overhead
    and my dream
    happy,
    gazing past
    my 'goodluck' eyes and smile
    doing what I do

    a silent cheerleader
    just for you





    Submitted on 2012-10-05 20:13:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Love it, love it, love it! No advice needed here!
    </3 Lisa
    | Posted on 2013-03-24 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is so endearing! gurlll we all go through the same things, thats why your writing is so charming; its raw and relatable. cheers
    | Posted on 2012-10-05 00:00:00 | by simpleandgreen | [ Reply to This ]


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