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Moments of Love

Author: irrelevantme
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Words: 52
Class/Type: Poetry /Romance
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the pains of forbidden love

Moments of Love

catching your gazes at me
and the other way around

a secret smile shared
when nothing seems sound

brushing as we stand
under the table, held my hand

we shouldn't kiss,
we shouldn't hug;

so they tell us

but I'll always keep
these moments of our love

Submitted on 2012-10-05 20:36:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Woah, written as if you could see into my heart. This was just vague enough for others to relate; and it was detailed enough to paint a vivid picture for the reader. Thank you for sharing! I almost cried as it compelled me to reminisce on my own experiences. Bravo
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| Posted on 2013-03-24 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
  i hope everything works out well.brings back fond memories long gone. simple yet complicated, i like it
| Posted on 2012-11-30 00:00:00 | by nosferotu_gurl | [ Reply to This ]
  This forbidden love is so intriguing. Also very romantic
but not knowing all the details (I so want to know)
all I can advise is guard your heart and try not to turn
it into an obsession because those never seem to end
| Posted on 2012-10-06 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
  this brought me back many years to a certain incident...what we couldn't do but wanted to---eventually we passed on the moment knowing it was best. But the feeling was mutual, the intensity there, the unacted upon chemistry that was knowing look, a feeling, a what if....

better left alone, but at the same time, frustrating to let it get away.

the one thing is, no one would ever know, except us.

| Posted on 2012-10-06 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
  i smiled while reading this ;) its all too familiar, that horrible yet exciting restraint. this is a lovely simple write yet it holds the complexity of feelings. nice one my friend :D
| Posted on 2012-10-05 00:00:00 | by simpleandgreen | [ Reply to This ]
  hiding your love from the world is painful
not being able to freely show affection sends a fire of yearning in our hearts

nice write
| Posted on 2012-10-05 00:00:00 | by sandy26 | [ Reply to This ]

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