Moments of Love

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Moments of Love

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catching your gazes at me and the other way around a secret smile shared when nothing seems sound brushing as we stand under the table, held my hand we shouldn't kiss, we shouldn't hug; so they tell us but I'll always keep these moments of our love

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Woah, written as if you could see into my heart. This was just vague enough for others to relate; and it was detailed enough to paint a vivid picture for the reader. Thank you for sharing! I almost cried as it compelled me to reminisce on my own experiences. Bravo </3 Lisa

| Posted on 2013-03-24 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]

i hope everything works out well.brings back fond memories long gone. simple yet complicated, i like it

| Posted on 2012-11-30 00:00:00 | by nosferotu_gurl | [ Reply to This ]

This forbidden love is so intriguing. Also very romantic but not knowing all the details (I so want to know) all I can advise is guard your heart and try not to turn it into an obsession because those never seem to end well.

| Posted on 2012-10-06 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]

this brought me back many years to a certain incident...what we couldn't do but wanted to---eventually we passed on the moment knowing it was best. But the feeling was mutual, the intensity there, the unacted upon chemistry that was knowing look, a feeling, a what if.... better left alone, but at the same time, frustrating to let it get away. the one thing is, no one would ever know, except us. jacob

| Posted on 2012-10-06 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

i smiled while reading this ;) its all too familiar, that horrible yet exciting restraint. this is a lovely simple write yet it holds the complexity of feelings. nice one my friend :D

| Posted on 2012-10-05 00:00:00 | by simpleandgreen | [ Reply to This ]

hiding your love from the world is painful not being able to freely show affection sends a fire of yearning in our hearts nice write

| Posted on 2012-10-05 00:00:00 | by sandy26 | [ Reply to This ]

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