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    dots Submission Name: Rosesdots
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    Author: sandy26
    Elite Ratio:    2.5 - 6/4/3
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsRosesdots
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    symbolizing love
    of several colors
    in many shades

    concealing beauty
    in a blooming bud

    fragrant and blooming
    a gift from above

    beautiful and delicate
    frail and rare

    shrouded by thorns
    yet exquisite when grown well




    Submitted on 2012-10-05 20:51:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this, as Jacob says simple can be the best and this says everything I need to hear about the rose in so few words.

    This is a great little poem

    Thank you for sharing

    LCL
    | Posted on 2012-10-19 00:00:00 | by Localfreak | [ Reply to This ]
      kind of odd in a way isn't it==

    something so pretty symbolizing love, yet surrounded by thorns...i guess it means that we have to always love with care or it may sting us...

    jumping into a bed of roses can be passion, or it could be painful.

    simple in a way this poem is...yet

    sometimes simple says it best.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-10-05 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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