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    dots Submission Name: Lipsdots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLipsdots
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    I have labored for years
    on the one question
    now I am resolved

    the conclusion was inevitable
    after all the information was
    melted down

    after I dutifully studied
    every smile and frown
    the secret is now found

    No Really!

    I have cogitated the point
    ad infinitum.
    And      n     o     w      wait for it!
    I have determined

    Lips

    are

    the

    reason

    God

    Made                ! P I N K !





    Submitted on 2012-10-06 04:37:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Gosh, I guess, that's an apt reason for pink to exist. Definitely not my favourite colour, to be honest.
    I can just imagine all the information being melted into this massive sculpture of lips. Why are these bits of flesh so fascinating? Aside from the gazillions of nerve endings, that is.

    Is it wrong that this made me smile a little? I just love how it jumps to this conclusion, along with the photo. Just. Pink.

    Me gusta.

    -Esha.
    | Posted on 2012-10-08 00:00:00 | by EshyFishy | [ Reply to This ]


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