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    dots Submission Name: Jungle Magicdots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsJungle Magicdots
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    She is the essence of Imaginarium.
    Born of lighting
    a smoke offering given to the moon.
    She has ascended to the heavens
    and returned as the child
    of elemental summer.

    Conceived by magic
    she is too pure a jungle maiden
    to tame.
    Her Gift
    Is resurrection

    she brings me back to life
    with
    a smile.




    Submitted on 2012-10-06 05:47:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Thank you Dale! ;-)
    | Posted on 2012-10-06 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really nice Dale. Jeniecel is beautiful here. I love how you describe her as someone magical and and pure. She'll love this!
    | Posted on 2012-10-06 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]
      wow this is so sweet
    | Posted on 2012-10-06 00:00:00 | by sandy26 | [ Reply to This ]


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