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    dots Submission Name: Innocent Lovedots
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    Author: sandy26
    Elite Ratio:    2.5 - 6/4/3
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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    dotsInnocent Lovedots
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    Chills down my spine
    so new, so divine

    the first blush
    from a racing heart to pulse

    rosebuds,
    naively fresh,
    fragile





    Submitted on 2012-10-06 08:55:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this one. It's short but seems to say so much with so little words. I completely agree with it, especially the part 'so new, so divine', because that's what young love really is. It's something new and exciting and confusing. good job :)
    | Posted on 2012-10-11 00:00:00 | by LiveInDreams | [ Reply to This ]
      first love can also be innocent love..I agree with your message in this..especially in the last bit..this kind of love really is fragile

    keep writing:)
    | Posted on 2012-10-06 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]


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