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    dots Submission Name: inspiration.dots

    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 250
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 622
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    Driven by a fear for which I
    have no name, seeking answers to
    mysteries that torment my soul
    I am summoned by the siren of passion.
    I dare not refuse her call!

    I am at first merely tantalized
    by erotic dream.
    Where she speaks to me in vision
    of flame swirling through cascading hair.

    I have no choice
    but to change the course of escapade.
    The turbulent river of myself becomes
    steam roiling into thin air.

    I rush as madly driven cloud
    to merge with her molten sea of eternity.
    I am enthralled by the timelessness
    of the eternal dance
    glowing swords flash
    whispered sighs
    my startled eyes.

    As coruscating sunsets
    seductively paint her litheness
    with swaths of liquid fire.

    she sways with divine invitation
    importuning the vortex of creation
    she unveils a feast grown sweeter with
    each slicing kiss of steel.

    Smeared seething with wanton adore
    my lips grow faint and my heart stutters.
    But her tenderness so warm and willing
    is not mercy
    merely prelude of temptation.

    Once lit the feted flame of slaughter
    knows no bounds, and so unfettered
    it seeks relief.

    I Dip into the mulled wine of paradise
    So sensual this torrid touch
    consumes all thought of reason.
    whimpered cries
    fill me heart and soul

    with blood

    Submitted on 2012-10-06 19:20:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This one is cool. Who is this girl?
    | Posted on 2012-10-12 00:00:00 | by quicksorrow | [ Reply to This ]
      I sense the dance of Tarentella in this one.

    | Posted on 2012-10-07 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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