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    dots Submission Name: Extinguisheddots
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    Author: metallichick786
    ASL Info:    32/F/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 78/85/52
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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    Bytes: 315



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    dotsExtinguisheddots
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    Relentless darkness
    Will you ever finish what you began?
    I have grown weary of your musing
    A dormant monster- you always return
    You rise in flames, a demon with a vengeance
    If I cry to you will that satisfy?
    If I bleed for you will you then sleep?
    If I die for you?




    Submitted on 2012-10-07 16:54:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is quite a big punch in a small package, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2012-10-14 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this on a personal note. this is short but says a lot. the last part was a thrill.
    nice;-)
    | Posted on 2012-10-07 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]


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