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    dots Submission Name: Winding Clock of Timedots
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    Author: Shadow_Mirror
    ASL Info:    23/m/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.59 - 54/39/18
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1134
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 499



    Description:
       Something random, I decided to write again after many years, haven't been depressed enough for good inspiration so the quality is at sub par, hope someone still gets to enjoy it though.


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    dotsWinding Clock of Timedots
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    Tick Tick Tock,
    This backwards clock,
    Moving one foot forward,
    Slip two more back.
    Where does it end?

    Tick Tick Rock,
    Let's hear that shattered lock,
    Time flowing once more,
    down a river that never ends.
    Where are we going?

    Tick Tick Boom,
    Wait for it,
    The gentle breeze,
    The warm sunlight,
    The point of the End,
    That heralds the Beginning,
    Shadows of the Nightmare.




    Submitted on 2012-10-07 18:41:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well,I enjoyed this. I especially like the last 3 lines, it says a lot.
    | Posted on 2012-10-09 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]


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