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    dots Submission Name: ha/hadots
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    Author: YoungKaizen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC
    Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4/6/19
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 700
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    Bytes: 370



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    dotsha/hadots
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    Seldom happy, often sad

    childhood sucked, thanks to dad

    good to others, still treated bad

    wasted plenty, now wish i had

    tolerate many, why get mad

    fuck it all, now I'm glad

    veteran status, can't talk to me lad

    something something, ......... ad




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