[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Silver Glowdots

    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 29/50/46
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 698
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 228


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSilver Glowdots

    The soft and silver glow

    gilded love and dreaming

    twisting far above and elsewhere

    cold and winter seeming

    Submitted on 2012-10-08 00:16:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      I really like this. Especially how you used the word elsewhere. You have read a lot of Sci-Fi too haven't you? Or at least that's the vibe I'm getting from it...
    | Posted on 2012-10-09 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Push written by JanePlane
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Every..... written by jackz
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Fasade written by jackz
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Summer written by layDsayD
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Before, Now, & After written by SincerWritinAsh
    Happy Saint Patrick's Day written by poetotoe
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Bond written by saartha
    Estranged / Shocks written by Daniel Barlow
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Linger written by saartha




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]