Silver Glow

Author: Rhythmal Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 29 /50 /47 Words: 23

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Silver Glow

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The soft and silver glow gilded love and dreaming twisting far above and elsewhere cold and winter seeming

Submitted on 2012-10-08 00:16:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I really like this. Especially how you used the word elsewhere. You have read a lot of Sci-Fi too haven't you? Or at least that's the vibe I'm getting from it...

| Posted on 2012-10-09 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

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