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    dots Submission Name: Silver Glowdots
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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 29/50/46
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSilver Glowdots
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    The soft and silver glow

    gilded love and dreaming

    twisting far above and elsewhere

    cold and winter seeming




    Submitted on 2012-10-08 00:16:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this. Especially how you used the word elsewhere. You have read a lot of Sci-Fi too haven't you? Or at least that's the vibe I'm getting from it...
    | Posted on 2012-10-09 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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