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Silver Glow


Author: Rhythmal
Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 29 /50 /47
Words: 23
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Silver Glow



The soft and silver glow

gilded love and dreaming

twisting far above and elsewhere

cold and winter seeming




Submitted on 2012-10-08 00:16:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really like this. Especially how you used the word elsewhere. You have read a lot of Sci-Fi too haven't you? Or at least that's the vibe I'm getting from it...
| Posted on 2012-10-09 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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