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    dots Submission Name: Herniadots
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    Author: expiring_touch
    ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 137/243/158
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsHerniadots
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    Painkillers, poetry, your voice -
    That reassure me in whispers;
    I miss, I donít - - I hit and miss
    Kneel down Life, my sister.




    Submitted on 2012-10-09 16:17:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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