Hernia

Author: expiring_touch ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg Elite Ratio:    3.94 - 139 /256 /171 Words: 26

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Hernia

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Painkillers, poetry, your voice - That reassure me in whispers; I miss, I don’t - - I hit and miss Kneel down Life, my sister.

Submitted on 2012-10-09 16:17:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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