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    dots Submission Name: The Enddots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Fanfic/Serious
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    dotsThe Enddots
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    I know I am ugly deep inside
    I know I am only an object to those who surround me in this life
    I know I am of very little value if any to these people.
    I am the ultimate runt within the litter
    I am the ugly duck and I acknowledge this

    My problems stem back from childhood
    Nightmares still haunt me
    The pain still remains, permanently etched within my mind
    Memories... only the tip of the iceberg
    Depression eats at my core
    My own personal fears haunt me
    My past is at every turn

    I am my own worst enemy...

    I can see now how I will meet my end
    At a young age,
    Lying alone in a dark, chilly room
    Lost the will to fight
    Lost the endless battle of this deep seeded depression
    Tired of all this pain
    Tired of a world where I only encounter heartache and torment
    Lying alone, at young age
    I lose the willpower to live a life I was never meant to live...




    Submitted on 2012-10-10 23:50:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well life sucks. :) But you can make it better. Depression is just a vicious circle. You somehow have to find a way to break it. It's not that hard as it seems when you're caught in it. Sometimes is just a matter of finding something you enjoy and doing it for a long period of time. I can also tell you something that has helped me a lot: vitamin B complex. They are the only vitamins that regulate the functioning of the brain. They can help a lot with depression as they fortify you mentally so it's easier to find solutions as you simply have more mental strength. Give them a try, after one week you should start to feel a bit better...
    | Posted on 2012-10-11 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      I understand that what your saying everyone is going to say is untrue (which probably is) I understand exactly how you feel. I don't think it makes it any better that the world is so merely based on beauty nowadays to get noticed. Back then the chubby and ugly people were pretty, what happened? I believe everyone has flaws, but that's what makes them unique and different. Nothing wrong with being different. I really do like this because it speaks what so many people are feeling. It's natural to feel ugly, we all do. But should we base our beauty on what others think? I Just sit here and hope you don't fall too deep in a hole that you can't get out of :/
    | Posted on 2012-10-11 00:00:00 | by TalentedChild | [ Reply to This ]
      this poem makes me feel so sad...damn i just want to give you a hug and make it all better.


    | Posted on 2012-10-11 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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