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    dots Submission Name: Love Sensedots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLove Sensedots
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    Chicken Little tried to warn me.
    But I had to go and listen to what that white rabbit said.
    Now I am just a little lost soul
    playing a minor key role
    In
    The Midnight Moon’s mad Imaginarium.
    Hey I mean really
    is there anything sensible about love?
    My heart is red my feelings are true I followed a
    dragon looking for gold and I found you.
    Cover me in roses bury me beneath petals of blue.
    Follow me into dreamland. I know where to find
    an enchanted castle
    floating O’ so high in the air.
    I once Jumped out of a window into clear sky
    and landed in a
    muddle of love. You said I live in dream world.
    That chasing dragons is all I ever do.
    But that is not
    True. I am rescuing princesses from dastardly dragons.
    It was a dragon after all that led me to you.








    Submitted on 2012-10-13 15:26:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      is there anything sensible about love? there is, Chicken little even knows that.;-) Princesses need not to be rescued all the time. On love's sensibility, white rabbit whispers:

    Love is sensible,
    in every tears falling,
    falling even towards itself.
    In every dagger we carry,
    inside our hearts,
    to be twist and turn
    by sanity and lies.

    in every suicide,
    intoxicating the mind
    love is sensible,
    enough to overcome.



    | Posted on 2012-10-15 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]


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