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    dots Submission Name: Bypasseddots
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    Author: Localfreak
    ASL Info:    37, Maybe, Here
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 131/123/76
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 864
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1270



    Description:
       I'm not sure. I've not read it yet and probably nevr will.
    What a way to write eh? hah


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    dotsBypasseddots
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    Softly quietly gently thumping
    beating with the strength of life
    Struggling through the task ahead as
    narrow roads obstruct the ride

    It's dark inside and warm and cosy
    Until I spy a shaft of light.
    a glist'ning blade appears before me
    Slicing organs left and right

    a limb off in the dark besides me
    struggled hard but lost the fight
    my pumping blood gets clamped in place
    as fingers fumble at my side

    I start to quiet, my fear outstanding
    hoping that I shan't be seen
    but soon the fumbling finds another
    and a limb again gets shorn with ease


    My fear becomes a daunting terror
    I stop, I fall, I can't get up
    I feel those massive hands engulf me
    crushing, pounding me to pulp.

    Softly softly gently waking
    I feel around and find new life
    my limbs once torn hold strong around me
    mixed and matched from right to left

    softly pumping, gently, gently
    Life anew is filled with ease
    The narrow roads bypassed completely
    rescued by a glistening blade

    Bypassed my pain, I live today




    Submitted on 2012-10-13 19:38:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a weird poem and I have not a clue what it is about. I mean really I can't even guess. Ok wild guess
    heart bypass surgery?
    | Posted on 2012-10-21 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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