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    Author: jeniecel
    ASL Info:    28/f/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 313/373/169
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    amortize me,
    with words deep from a hollow on your hand
    'til I become a balancing figure
    prospectively roaming your heart.
    1:1
    a ratio of perpetual symmetry,
    where love is a small valuation,
    that equates you to me.

    So if I am x and you are y,
    one must exist,
    to find the value of each other.




    Submitted on 2012-10-14 05:13:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Amortize you with words? Even the down payment on such a value must be enormous! I will have to liquidate all of my assets and perhaps steal a library to acquire this amount. What is the length of term? I would think this to be a lifetime commitment at least. But to find the value of you that would complete my existence.
    | Posted on 2012-10-14 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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