Painting pictures

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Painting pictures

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He's wearing the mask the mask wears him tears him becomes him tells a different story of him than what is him truly now where is he? Is it the mirror that lies? his own eyes? identity becomes polluted changes to become what might be more suited She paints a selfportrait correct as she ought to be fought to be was taught to be but who would she be really now where is she? Is it the mirror that lies? her own eyes? identity becomes polluted changes to become what might be more suited

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F*ck paradox. I got the rhyme scheme, it wasn't the last words you were trying ti rhyme with. That said, i unfortunately did not understand the actual meaning. Not sure what you were trying to get at. Keep working at it though. You have plenty of potential.

| Posted on 2012-10-15 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]

I dunno. I don't really like the rhyming scheme used. You can't really rhyme a word with itself...

| Posted on 2012-10-14 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]