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Painting pictures

Author: Fie
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Words: 106
Class/Type: Poetry /Mirror or Mask
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Painting pictures

He's wearing the mask
the mask wears him
tears him
becomes him
tells a different story of him
than what is him
now where is he?

Is it the mirror that lies?
his own eyes?
identity becomes polluted
changes to become what
might be more suited

She paints a selfportrait
correct as she ought to be
fought to be
was taught to be
but who would she be
now where is she?

Is it the mirror that lies?
her own eyes?
identity becomes polluted
changes to become what
might be more suited

Submitted on 2012-10-14 07:08:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  F*ck paradox. I got the rhyme scheme, it wasn't the last words you were trying ti rhyme with. That said, i unfortunately did not understand the actual meaning. Not sure what you were trying to get at. Keep working at it though. You have plenty of potential.
| Posted on 2012-10-15 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
  I dunno. I don't really like the rhyming scheme used. You can't really rhyme a word with itself...
| Posted on 2012-10-14 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

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