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    dots Submission Name: Waiting for It (revised)dots
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    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    49/f/LA
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 327/382/122
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       I'll probably regret posting this pornuendo...


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    dotsWaiting for It (revised)dots
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    Not like an itch that yearns to be scratched.
    But like the scent of bread rising in the afternoon
    that awakens an appetite and hints at a joy
    that is to come.  Not meant be consumed 
    recklessly, but to be lingered over.  It's not misery
    to wait to be satisfied, but jubilation.
    It's not relief when relief comes, 
    but pure abandon.




    Submitted on 2012-10-14 08:50:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      pornuendo? I find it rather tame after reading that description. :) I know what you mean though. Routine is one of our biggest enemies. Few people realize that...
    | Posted on 2012-10-14 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      this is simple and beautiful and eloquent. the anticipation is just as pleasurable as the realization itself.
    your piece summons of images of exquisite pleasure in the mind created by the anticipatory imaginings.

    ~rubie
    | Posted on 2012-10-14 00:00:00 | by rubie | [ Reply to This ]
      this could relate to so many things...yes, it could refer to sex, the anticipation, the easing into it, how it can be so much of a turn on to take it slowly...to drive each other wild with the wanting...the savoring of the moment....the waiting is not misery...it is part of the pleasure...the flirting, the first touch, the next touch etc.

    but this could also refer to the dream of achieving...the seeing of it, the wanting of it, the journey there--all much worth the wait and anticipation...
    and the jubilation of reaching the climax of either.

    even with the description, there is a universality to this piece.

    smart right---a blush, then a smile and a "yeah, it's like that!"



    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-10-14 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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