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This day, an escape from rhythms and flexing thoughts, this home away from dreamscapes, is just salt pushing against feet, waiting for a drop of courage to seed it. I become more interesting and interested in life when the wind holds weight in my chest, if only for a moment to gaze into sunsets and realize new things. Svw

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Sometimes Not Doing is the best way to accomplish the Done.

| Posted on 2012-10-27 00:00:00 | by PassingThru | [ Reply to This ]

i think often the life we imagine seems more interesting than the one we are living. but...the one we are living is what we have...and it is good to make the most of it...enjoy what we have, but be surprised and pleased to see and learn new things also. i find myself to be a person who is pretty easily entertained...and little things float my boat...i relate to this in that way... my dreamscapes can be vast...but little dreams coming true and often be the best ones. jacob

| Posted on 2012-10-14 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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