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    dots Submission Name: eyedots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotseyedots
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    This day, an escape from
    rhythms and flexing
    thoughts, this home away
    from dreamscapes,
    is just salt pushing against
    feet, waiting for a drop of
    courage to seed it.

    I become more interesting
    and interested in life when
    the wind holds weight in
    my chest, if only for a
    moment to gaze into
    sunsets and realize new
    things.

    Svw




    Submitted on 2012-10-14 16:04:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sometimes Not Doing is the best way to accomplish the Done.
    | Posted on 2012-10-27 00:00:00 | by PassingThru | [ Reply to This ]
      i think often the life we imagine seems more interesting than the one we are living.

    but...the one we are living is what we have...and it is good to make the most of it...enjoy what we have, but be surprised and pleased to see and learn new things also.

    i find myself to be a person who is pretty easily entertained...and little things float my boat...i relate to this in that way...

    my dreamscapes can be vast...but little dreams coming true and often be the best ones.


    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-10-14 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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