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    dots Submission Name: dazzleddots

    Author: jeniecel
    ASL Info:    28/f/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 313/373/169
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    While the heart stops,
    and skips a beat,
    to analyze a word,
    in a city of mirrored definition
    it slowly turns to a spinning puzzle.


    The word is too small for us.

    Submitted on 2012-10-15 02:57:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    This one looks good as is

    I was lost when I saw your eyes
    Then your smile stopped my heart
    And my heart cried “who is she? I dare
    Not beat again until I know.”
    Now there is no ground beneath my feet.
    I do not care, because with her I can fly.
    Love is too small a word for you and I.
    | Posted on 2012-10-16 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      "love/ the word is too small for us"

    that really caught my eye--nice.

    "a city of mirrored definition"

    love looks itself in the mirror---it's a two way street.

    | Posted on 2012-10-15 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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