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    dots Submission Name: Open Letter to an Abuser of Womendots

    Author: lebeauvide
    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 75/295/165
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsOpen Letter to an Abuser of Womendots

    Every rapist in a made-for-television movie
    has your face.
    I wonder how long it will take
    for me to be able to walk past
    a yellow Mustang and not feel
    my heart take off at a full gallop,
    like a thousand feral horses
    driven by fear.

    Every man that has ever hurt a woman
    and went unpunished is you.
    And yet, I can't bring myself to cry wolf because
    I am terrified that they will think
    that crying wolf is all
    that it is.
    You're all of the worst things that the world has to offer.

    I cannot think of any form of medieval torture that would ever
    hurt you enough
    to make you understand
    how deep my wounds go
    and how the scars
    may never

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      I must admit that I came here expecting to find another whiny rant from somebody who has never experienced pain.
    Instead I am confronted with one of the best pieces of poetry I have seen in a long time.

    While your spacing is erratic I feel it gives a good tempo for the thought process although I did read few of the stanzas as one whole line.

    If this is not a true story I congratulate you one capturing the essence of the moment and if it is true I congratulate you on putting your feelings into words and hope that it helps the healing.

    | Posted on 2012-10-19 00:00:00 | by Localfreak | [ Reply to This ]
      cool work there lovely if this really happened i will gladly share the victim's pain.Hope to see more good poems from you friend
    | Posted on 2012-10-19 00:00:00 | by kingsley | [ Reply to This ]

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