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    dots Submission Name: Open Letter to an Abuser of Womendots
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    Author: lebeauvide
    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 75/295/165
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsOpen Letter to an Abuser of Womendots
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    Every rapist in a made-for-television movie
    has your face.
    I wonder how long it will take
    for me to be able to walk past
    a yellow Mustang and not feel
    my heart take off at a full gallop,
    like a thousand feral horses
    driven by fear.

    Every man that has ever hurt a woman
    and went unpunished is you.
    And yet, I can't bring myself to cry wolf because
    I am terrified that they will think
    that crying wolf is all
    that it is.
    You're all of the worst things that the world has to offer.

    I cannot think of any form of medieval torture that would ever
    hurt you enough
    to make you understand
    how deep my wounds go
    and how the scars
    may never
    really
    heal.





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    ||| Comments |||
      I must admit that I came here expecting to find another whiny rant from somebody who has never experienced pain.
    Instead I am confronted with one of the best pieces of poetry I have seen in a long time.

    While your spacing is erratic I feel it gives a good tempo for the thought process although I did read few of the stanzas as one whole line.

    If this is not a true story I congratulate you one capturing the essence of the moment and if it is true I congratulate you on putting your feelings into words and hope that it helps the healing.

    LCL
    | Posted on 2012-10-19 00:00:00 | by Localfreak | [ Reply to This ]
      cool work there lovely if this really happened i will gladly share the victim's pain.Hope to see more good poems from you friend
    | Posted on 2012-10-19 00:00:00 | by kingsley | [ Reply to This ]


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