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    dots Submission Name: homelessdots
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    Author: jeniecel
    ASL Info:    28/f/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 313/373/169
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotshomelessdots
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    I love you,
    dearly as a whirlwind would mellow
    to a soft breeze on your skin.
    I love you,
    but you command for my heart,
    the only thing I have when all,
    is on a catapult of broken dreams,
    throwing its arrows rectlessly.

    Oh could you love me in a manner adrift your strenght, to hold our breaths against our parting? It is easier to leave,
    with half my eye on your back,


    a lifelong dying.

    But I choose to live with you,
    in all of your words and hours
    permanently,
    as yours in all of mine.

    loving, even with your terrestrial absence,
    in the most silent way I could whisper,
    to the universe where I hid my heart,
    and on your hand where the pulse lies.


    Oh could you love me in a manner adrift your strenght, to hold our breaths against our parting?
    nevertheless, return to our home,
    with unchanging keys.







    Submitted on 2012-10-18 09:33:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      (But I choose to live with you,
    in all of your words and hours
    permanently,
    as yours in all of mine.) FAV

    (Oh could you love me in a manner adrift your strenght, to hold our breaths against our parting?
    nevertheless, return to our home,
    with unchanging keys.) YES
    | Posted on 2012-10-27 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it!
    I love this line dearly as a whirlwind would mellow
    to a soft breeze on your skin.

    Also, I do not understand how the title and subject of the poem correlate?
    | Posted on 2012-10-22 00:00:00 | by She Is Insane | [ Reply to This ]
      Sweet piece here. I suggest you change the title
    | Posted on 2012-10-19 00:00:00 | by quicksorrow | [ Reply to This ]


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