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Submission Name:
An I
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Author:
Iram
ASL Info:
25/F/from your world
Elite Ratio:
2.66 - 50/62/55
Words:
189
Class/Type:
Poetry/Misc
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An I
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Once upon a time
A moment froze up
Like a crystal around me
And the world that I see
Never changed again
I feel.
Once upon a time
There was an I
That remained but I died
And never resurrected
Or may be I forgot
My rise.
I was an anyone
Like we are anyones
Go, fly high and
See from the sky
How alike do we look
And how do we make
A snap, whole of we.
Time has stopped
I watched its hush
From above the world
Everything new
Is the rain of it
In the equao drops
Minutely differed
Human.
In the crystalline reflection
Of vibrating momentous
We become anyones
Or become everyones
Upto a yardstick
Upto easily available
Versions of liberty.
But freedom is not to shriek
As a crowd
Our freedom is not a decay
In the dark
Freedom is to smile
While we fly
Freedom is to believe
How we die
Once upon a time
A moment became free
And I ran within it
Once upon a time
There was an I
Among anyones
Who could write.
Submitted on 2012-10-18 12:49:28
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