I don't think there's a word wasted in this poem. I like it quite a lot actually: the simplicity of parts mixed with the more inventive wording at parts. I like that it's straight up but there's also this entire part left out that we have to guess at- and that's very nice.
And then I thought: damn if I don't know that feeling- caring about someone when you'd rather not for whatever reason.
Hey, it's good stuff. And the formatting works really well also.
Damn! This sounds so intense. So basically you fell in love with someone who is not that great? (well the narrator in the poem) I like how you add dumb chick at the end - like how there is a lot of space between the rest of the poem and that line. It really emphasizes on that last line.