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    dots Submission Name: Wagering Heartdots
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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWagering Heartdots
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    a heart concealed in rock-solid fear
    ground between, an empty space
    broken by a moonstruck emotion
    out of the blue,
    firstly masked in the vast unknown,
    became the words:
    "I Love You"




    Submitted on 2012-10-20 06:35:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow! I wonder why anyone hasnt admired this piece of work yet. I love the way u have intensified the three words briefly. Not everyone can do good with fewer words. I like it.
    | Posted on 2012-10-28 00:00:00 | by Iram | [ Reply to This ]


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