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Wagering Heart


Author: irrelevantme
Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83 /89 /62
Words: 35
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Wagering Heart





a heart concealed in rock-solid fear
ground between, an empty space
broken by a moonstruck emotion
out of the blue,
firstly masked in the vast unknown,
became the words:
"I Love You"




Submitted on 2012-10-20 06:35:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Wow! I wonder why anyone hasnt admired this piece of work yet. I love the way u have intensified the three words briefly. Not everyone can do good with fewer words. I like it.
| Posted on 2012-10-28 00:00:00 | by Iram | [ Reply to This ]


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