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    dots Submission Name: Falling for Youdots

    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsFalling for Youdots

    No longer does this day suffice
    nor in anyway can current mood
    contain this spirit,
    no not when it is the future
    holds you.

    My eyes have deserted me
    they have departed with my
    Together they seek the impossible
    while I, wait in restraint.

    Every hour of every day that
    passed before there was you?
    the sea has washed away.

    It is the future where (live) resides.

    Man can forge Iron
    Heaven's elemental fires can forge planets

    you forge hearts into stars
    Now I am your shooting star
    and I shall fall wherever you are.

    Submitted on 2012-10-21 04:31:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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       (live) ?

    I like this, it has a feel of real dedication and expectation which I can relate to.

    | Posted on 2012-10-27 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Sensible and heartfelt, I see you are transforming and I like where it is heading.

    | Posted on 2012-10-21 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]

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