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    dots Submission Name: Creation of Originsdots
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    Author: lolaxelmo
    ASL Info:    23/F/IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 34/37/38
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Prose/Society
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    dotsCreation of Originsdots
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    The idea was not my own
    It was planted, seeded through a reluctant
    transfer of brain waves into the subconscious--
    It could have been my own, the origins of
    originality sparked within the lobes
    of my thinking
    Snuck through the vision of consciousness
    I call mine
    though manipulated by mediation
    from a more intellectualized state
    bought second hand, used and cheap
    vintage in irony
    recycled life.




    Submitted on 2012-10-21 19:56:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a very unique idea and worded out well. This had me interested up to the very last line. Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2012-10-30 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a very unique idea and worded out well. This had me interested up to the very last line. Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2012-10-30 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, i really like this...so well worded and particularly relatable to me..in my argumentative research class the other night, we were discussing plagiarism, and what is intellectual property...

    what is really stealing from others....i mean there are words and phrases out there that have been used forever it seems...someone said them first...but who?

    and what really is created out of nothing in the mind...isn't it always from something we saw and heard.

    poets use words, often the same words...we just look for different ways to put them together so that a piece sound unique.

    but in some way...i'm not so sure what really belongs to someone else...seems it is all out there for the taking, even if it is only subconsciously...

    this piece stirs much thought...on the "origins of originality"

    and what we call ours.

    good write. i like good poems about writing...it's our thing, why not write about it more often.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-10-21 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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