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    dots Submission Name: Talking Dirtydots
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    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    49/f/LA
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 327/382/122
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 685
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    dotsTalking Dirtydots
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    Woppa papa doppa
    Woppa papa doppa doo
    I like the way you woppa 
    And the way I woppa, too.
    I go on the green light, 
    And I stop on the red;
    I ain't never been hungry
    Cause I never been fed.

    Shoop de doop de doola
    Shoop de doop de loo
    When you shoop your doola,
    I wanna shoop my doola, too.
    If you go on the green light, 
    I'll go on the red;
    I ain't never been hungry
    Cause I never been fed.

    Tappa tappa lappa lappa
    Tappa tappa lappa lay
    Let's tappa lap together,
    Tappa lappa, what you say?
    I'll go on the green light,
    If you go on the red;
    We ain't never been hungry
    Til we been fed.

    Rumba jumba jamba
    Rumba jumba rhyme
    Nothin' like a little rumba 
    When its rumba jumba time.
    We'll go on the green lights,
    And we'll go on the reds;
    We ain't never been hungry
    Like when we been fed.





    Submitted on 2012-10-22 03:35:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      left's get right to the 'heart' of the matter. I left out a few of your lines:


    papa

    I like the way you woppa
    I woppa, too.




    shoop your doola,
    shoop my doola, too.



    lay lap together,
    what you say?


    it's rumba jumba time.


    Fun write, me like.
    | Posted on 2012-10-22 00:00:00 | by ponykeeper | [ Reply to This ]
      as i was reading this i started singing Jan and Dean's "Baby Talk," all the while thinking of "the Shoop Shoop song"---

    only a little more the "R" version---Restricted to those who obey stop lights, at least for awhile.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-10-22 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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