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    dots Submission Name: What Happened To the Little Girl.........dots
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    Author: marielea
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    dotsWhat Happened To the Little Girl.........dots
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    Your little girl was so innocent way back then,
    What happened to her pure heart?
    Now all that she does is sin,
    What happened to the little girl with piggy tails?
    The one who jumped up and down just thinking about veggie tales,
    Now that little girl runs in the hands of trouble,
    She stands in the midst of the rubble she has caused,
    What happened to the little girl who cried when she got scraped up?
    The one who loved Mickey Mouse club house,
    Now that little girl inflicts pain upon herself,
    She’s falling off the shelf of heartbreak,
    What happened to the little girl who was a mini version of the Virgin Mary?
    The one who never let a person look,
    Now that little girl is nowhere near a saint,
    She loves the way men turn their heads,
    What happened to the little girl who loved Scooby doo?
    Who was a newbie at Yu-GI-Oh?
    Now that little girl feels unloved,
    She now lays in bed thinking about what her next move is,
    What happened to the little girl who used to twirl in the rain?
    The one who always curled up in daddy’s lap,
    Now that little girl feel so much emotional pain,
    She now wonders what life is really meant to be,
    What happened to the little girl who used to have tea party’s with her teddy bear?
    The one who smiled at anyone and everyone,
    Now that little girl has a sign on her door: BEWARE,
    She never grins only glares,
    What happened to the little girl who said her prayers every night?
    The little girl who cared about every little thing,
    Now that little girl swings her fist at innocent things,
    She now springs out of bed at night because of her hellish nightmares,
    What happened to the little girl who embellished everything she wore?
    The one who loved when it was time to go to school,
    Now that little girl wears black only black,
    She now looks back and thinks about what her life should have been like,
    What happened to the little girl who ate all her food?
    The one who was always in a good mood,
    Now that little girl disparages her food,
    She is always in an antagonistic mood,
    What happened to the little girl who viewed everything so innocently?
    The one who was full of true laughter,
    Now that little girl’s whole life is a taboo,
    She never acts like her inner self,
    What happened to the little girl who wasn’t afraid to speak her mind?
    The one who loved to wear pink fluffy dresses,
    Now that little girl keeps everything built up inside,
    She never dresses nice because she doesn’t want to be realized,
    What happened to the little girl that was once so sweet?
    The one who was so innocent way back then,
    Now that little girl is going through hell,
    She never wants to say all her beloved little tales,
    That little girl lost her one and only childhood…………………………….




    Submitted on 2012-10-22 10:17:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      If girls and puppies could stay little & never change, the world would be too cute and utterly predictable.
    | Posted on 2012-10-27 00:00:00 | by PassingThru | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey this line confused me a little "She never wants to say all her beloved little tales" what do you mean? This poem is well written because it reminded me of my own childhood. I also would like to know why there are a lot of periods after the last sentence. Anyway, I think you did a great job in contrasting what she was and what she is now. Good job!
    | Posted on 2012-10-22 00:00:00 | by She Is Insane | [ Reply to This ]

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