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    dots Submission Name: Wolf in the Fortressdots
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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 878
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    Description:
       for Genro :)

    so silly . . .


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    dotsWolf in the Fortressdots
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    You were quick,
    too quick,
    in your wild duets
    came by me for just a minute

    Said you didn't like girls
    made of false ethics,
    too much of demands;
    but you were just a man

    Your hair of fiery red
    blazed at the touch of a hand,
    shattering every defense
    with your fire-breathing fan

    Obnoxious and loud,
    you sneer with your fangs
    entering my fortress,
    oh my cunning wolf faced man!




    Submitted on 2012-10-22 11:35:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Genro, eh? I remember the episode when he first appeared. He really is like a wolf with the fangs and speed. He's one of my favorite characters in the story. Fushigi yugi would be so boring without him.
    I really like the idea that you made this for him, I find it hard. I don't think it's silly at all. I'd want to make something like this someday.

    Keep writing
    | Posted on 2012-10-30 00:00:00 | by sandy26 | [ Reply to This ]
      I so like your verse! But I'm old, so that soap-opera situations from junior love-lives just bore me. Are you going to begin, someday, your project to save the world?
    | Posted on 2012-10-22 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]


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