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Wolf in the Fortress

Author: irrelevantme
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for Genro :)

so silly . . .

Wolf in the Fortress

You were quick,
too quick,
in your wild duets
came by me for just a minute

Said you didn't like girls
made of false ethics,
too much of demands;
but you were just a man

Your hair of fiery red
blazed at the touch of a hand,
shattering every defense
with your fire-breathing fan

Obnoxious and loud,
you sneer with your fangs
entering my fortress,
oh my cunning wolf faced man!

Submitted on 2012-10-22 11:35:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Genro, eh? I remember the episode when he first appeared. He really is like a wolf with the fangs and speed. He's one of my favorite characters in the story. Fushigi yugi would be so boring without him.
I really like the idea that you made this for him, I find it hard. I don't think it's silly at all. I'd want to make something like this someday.

Keep writing
| Posted on 2012-10-30 00:00:00 | by sandy26 | [ Reply to This ]
  I so like your verse! But I'm old, so that soap-opera situations from junior love-lives just bore me. Are you going to begin, someday, your project to save the world?
| Posted on 2012-10-22 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]

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