I like the sentiment of the poem and how easily it flows. I like the universal theme of a friendship left to wither because (perhaps) we didn't dedicate the time to nurture it. Whether its an online friend or not people that we consider friends make an impact in our lives and it is sad when the friendship fades away. I agree with the previous posts that your poem does force the reader to stop and ponder about previous friendships that have come and gone.
That just spoke to me & I suspect to countless others and all the online friends that we have never met in person and now live their lives separate from us but had once touched us and shared our innermost selves with. Beautiful and poignant in one breath. Excellent expression. Faved!
hmm i hope this reaches that friend. i've had many friends like that. online people who made an impact. i do truely hope who you intend to read this reads it. it's a very touching sentiment. this does make me think of a lot of people i've known through here and how that always seems to pan out. i hope that you find closure through this. sometimes a reconnection isn't always best. but who knows. it's a toss up.
Submission Name: Fallen Friend
