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    dots Submission Name: My Monetdots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 26
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    dotsMy Monetdots
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    Seen from far away,
    Perfection, most would say

    But when I get close
    No one would guess
    You're one big mess

    My monet




    Submitted on 2012-10-23 18:36:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      HAHAHA, love it. "She's not so good in individual pieces, but once you put them all together, she's quite lovely..."
    | Posted on 2012-10-27 00:00:00 | by PassingThru | [ Reply to This ]
      So simple, yet this is great, it very much so applies to a few people I could think of. We often view others as a masterpiece until we're close enough to see the truth... this is awesome.
    | Posted on 2012-10-27 00:00:00 | by metallichick786 | [ Reply to This ]


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