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    dots Submission Name: Sighdots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Sigh...
    I heard her voice today.
    It was soft, comforting, and matter of fact
    like the way she'd say, "see you tonight" when i kissed her morning lips good-bye...
    it echoed in my head, and for a minute...just a minute...

    i remembered happiness




    Submitted on 2012-10-23 18:49:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Small and sweet.. no flowery language yet scentful. Good one!
    | Posted on 2012-10-28 00:00:00 | by Iram | [ Reply to This ]


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