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    dots Submission Name: A Different Perspectivedots
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    Author: irrelevantme
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    Words: 75
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    dotsA Different Perspectivedots
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    In the darkness, I danced
    crept within the security of the unseen
    where dilated eyes could never grasp
    a single glimpse of light

    In the chaos, I sang
    filling echoes with disguised vibrations
    where unheard screams rejoice
    a song of voiceless value

    I worry not of towering crowds,
    as precious time materialize,
    life pulls them forward, never back
    from where I,
    I chose to remain with my unbeknown joys intact





    Submitted on 2012-10-25 03:14:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Such a sweet one! Those words and the idea reveal your poetic heart. Being a poetess myself, i clearly feel where those different perspectives come from. Good job!
    | Posted on 2012-10-28 00:00:00 | by Iram | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this, yet again a wonderful read by a wonderful poet!
    | Posted on 2012-10-27 00:00:00 | by metallichick786 | [ Reply to This ]


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