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    dots Submission Name: End Lovedots
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    Author: ClownLove
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 474
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsEnd Lovedots
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    When You Fall In Love Everything Feels Great
    You Wanna Make Love And Put On A Happy Face
    Everything That Was Tough Becomes Lighter Then Space
    Everything That She Does Makes You Smile With Grace
    For A While Its Great You Make Plans You Debate
    Like What To Name Your Child What To Wear on Your Dates
    Everythings Sqaured Away Not Aware Of Tha Rain
    You Wish Everything Could Stay Tha Same
    But Everything Changes
    And You Blame It On Yourself
    Saying That Without You
    She'd Be Happier With Someone Elze
    Even Though You Know Its Not True
    You Try To Leave It Out
    But It Seemed To Always Got Through
    Now All You Want To Do Iz Lock Yourself In Your Room
    And Try To Forget About It
    You've Been Living Honest
    And Look What Its Gotten You
    A Bitch Along With A Million Broken Promises
    No One Wants To
    Admit It But Both You Know Your Finished..........

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    Now Your Cold Hearted And Your Souls Embarking
    Alone On A Road To That Wholesome Darkness
    Went From Living Gold To A Run Down Apartment
    Hold A Loaded Gun To Your Earlobe Starting
    To Pull On It Slow "Dearly Departed"
    Finally Let Go Watched It Fall To The Carpet
    Feeling Your Heart Ripped Out Of Your Carcus
    I Don't Even Know Where I' Going
    Or Even How Far It Iz
    And You Don't Even Know
    Really How Hard It Iz
    I'ma Bout To Fold
    I Already Know
    The Cards I'ma Get
    Itz Bizarre But It Fits
    Tired Of wondering
    Where You Are
    And Who You With


    I'm Misunderstood And At Times I'm Conflicted
    You Been With Otha Guys But Gurl I'm Different
    I Don't Spit Lines CuZ I Don't Really Give A Shit
    And If You Lie I'll Probally Just Live With It
    Until Its Time Then I'll Just Leave The Bitch
    Back On My Grind Being Me And Thats It
    Rapping Peace Sign Middle Finger Last Hit
    AlwayZ On My Mind...But i Always Forget
    I'm Not Worth A Dime And You My 2 Cents
    Stay True To Myself Cuz Thats Who I Influence
    Say Goodbye To Me Hello To Your New Friends
    You Don't Lie To Them But Me Thats What you Do Since
    Were not together anymore
    I dont know why i wait forever for this whore
    im ready to go forward ignore her
    boring excuses go towards the futurel
    and restore order to conquer the confusion





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