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    dots Submission Name: hingedots
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    Author: jeniecel
    ASL Info:    28/f/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 313/373/169
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 682
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       ...and all these shapes on my head...


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    dotshingedots
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    we live in angles
    in different lenghts and widths
    of perpendicular lines
    our lives met at a certain
    point, ninety degrees to
    the right.

    symmetry
    and
    madness
    in whatever form
    it may be
    we are all equiangulars
    of a circular earth.

    but far from our
    world's own geometry
    as for you
    and me
    we are supplementary
    no matter our values
    we still form
    a hundred and eighty degrees.







    Submitted on 2012-10-25 17:29:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I always have admired this one and I really want to do math with
    you now.
    Honestly this is more than clever you have quite solved the riddle of nuance that sustains our proof
    | Posted on 2013-03-30 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't like geometry until reading this. The last four lines stood out the most to me.
    | Posted on 2012-10-26 00:00:00 | by quicksorrow | [ Reply to This ]
      life is chances, it is serendipity, it is geography and it is geometry...

    no matter what, the equation that is most comfortable, the one we hope all of those chances, serendipity, geography and geometry create...is 1+1 = 1.

    love can hinge on so many things...my significant other and i talk about all the things that brought us together, timing, as well as the four above...

    there is madness in love..but often it's a good madness...one that makes us deliriously insane...

    in the second line i think you want "length"

    but a really clever piece

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-10-26 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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